Sunday, June 10, 2012

peepal... aur tum..

auratein
peepal ke gird
lal dhaga baandh kar
maangti hain
mannatein

tum
jo mere jeevan ke
peepal ho
- sthir, adol, anant..
tumhare gird
lal dhaga baandh kar,
tumhe maang loon??

9 comments:

Manish Raj said...

mannatein kabool ho chuki jinki..
wo mann ke dhagon say aakar milti..

bandhan unhi dhagon ka hai..
ye peepal tumhara hi to hai..

Gentle Breeze said...

Aye Khuda, Meri Aawaz Pahuncha Uske Dil Tak
Mera Dil De Raha Uske Dil Pe Dastak

Uski Ek Aahat Aur Dekhne Ko Uski Ek Jhalak?
Kya Kabhi Poori Hogi Meri Use Paane Ki Mannat

nice song...try this link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=US&v=Cjyy7mZue20

A said...

It's so intense in so simple words, I'm speechless. Keep writing.

Best,
A

Himanshu Tandon said...

So finally you decided to post this...Good one.. :)

Frog-in-the-Well said...

Divine..

How do we know said...

Guruji: Errm.. ye comment kuchh samajh mein nahi aaya... samjhaiye pls.

hi GB: what a sweet, romantic response!

hi A: yes. thank you. Glad u understood the intensity and liked it.

Hi HT: :-)


hi frog in the well: ty!

adee said...

Reminds me of an old poem me n dee wrote :) do u remember kalpvriksha?

adee said...

But I loved the ending. Too good.

How do we know said...

Adee: of course i remember Kalpavriksha.. i read it for a lot of days.. :-)

thank you!