pain
like water
fills up
the ocean
and the thimble
pain
like water
takes the shape of
every mould
the heart makes
for itself.
pain
like water
makes up
60% of
me.
like water
fills up
the ocean
and the thimble
pain
like water
takes the shape of
every mould
the heart makes
for itself.
pain
like water
makes up
60% of
me.
11 comments:
and pain like water is essential for life..
Pain, unlike water, has bitter taste. :)
Pain like water
freezes over
when life turn cold
Pain like water
gushes out
from eyes when sore
and finally
Pain like water
mixes well
with my evening scotch :)
hi chiya: i LOVE when u take a metaphor and develop it... ur one line kind of turns the post on its head, doesnt it :-) lovely.
hi richa: :-) and an even bitter after taste...
hi HT: as usual, YOU EXCEL YOURSELF. how do u develop these metaphors better than i can imagine? the last one is just too good.
Pain does not make up 60% of you...you think pain makes up 60% of you!!
Thoughts are you best friends...thoughts are your worst enemy. They can take you from a sunlit day to a rainy night within a moment.
Pain unlike water,
Feeds on itself,
and grows more and more..
watermelons are painful to eat
Lovely lines
hi mayz: and some ppl are just happier in the rain. some ppl prefer the sun.
Hi frog in well: yes. that is true too.
hi varun: you bet they are. at 95% water, for sure!
onkar sir: thank you!
gosh you are a fine poet....
i know the pain you speak of. i've carried it too, for too long. 60%. i think that means change is calling you; that 40% knows better.
your comments here are great. i'm glad i've come by.
xoxo
kj
hi kj: :-) thank you.. that 40% knows better? :-) i wish!!
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