This is a random personal blog - covering everything from poetry to politics. Views presented are strictly my own.
Water my heart
with dewy drops of words
hanging from a poem.
Water my soul
with tears
jerked involuntarily
from words
that come from strangers
but know the exact nature
and depth
of the stab wound
in my heart.
You are such an evocative poet!
wow Debra! Thank you for saying that. I wrote this just to vent, not really as a poem, but your comment gave me the courage to put it out there on a poetry group.
वाह!! कितनी प्यारी बात कही है आपने, हरेक दिल एक सा है, सो दूजे के दिल का हाल जान ही लेता है, शब्दों का तुषार कहीं से भी आये, दिल को थाम ही लेता है
Dhanyavaad Anita ji! Ek kitaab padhte hus ehsaas hua ki achha likhne se pehle bahut padhna kitna zaroori hai. reviewing that book now.
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You are such an evocative poet!
wow Debra! Thank you for saying that. I wrote this just to vent, not really as a poem, but your comment gave me the courage to put it out there on a poetry group.
वाह!! कितनी प्यारी बात कही है आपने, हरेक दिल एक सा है, सो दूजे के दिल का हाल जान ही लेता है, शब्दों का तुषार कहीं से भी आये, दिल को थाम ही लेता है
Dhanyavaad Anita ji! Ek kitaab padhte hus ehsaas hua ki achha likhne se pehle bahut padhna kitna zaroori hai. reviewing that book now.
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