माँ बाप ने नाम गलत रखा मेरा
आकृति का होता है आकार
मेरी नियति
जल
- जिस घर में बसें
उसका आकार लें
निज का नहीं
डेढ़ अक्षर की भूल, बस
मेरा गुण-संगत नाम
रखते, तो होता
आहुति
Translation, but the word Ahuti has a very specific connotation - it is sacrifice made to the holy fire where the person making the sacrifice earns good karma or a tangible spiritual or material reward. The piece should be read with that connotation.
They got the name wrong
It should not have been
Valerie
- the strong one.
What use is strength
in a girl?
If they had named me
as they raised me
My name would have been
Ahuti
- the Sacrifice.
1 comment:
Powerful poem, as always.
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