This is a random personal blog - covering everything from poetry to politics. Views presented are strictly my own.
Wow! what thinking!! I think this one is your best out of all the compositions I have read on your blog. What I like about your creations is their starkness-a kind of furious power that emanates from them. A few words but tark reality!! I hope you continue to write forever and always...
Yes, so right.Your compositions always leave me with a big gaping 'wow'
What a fresh perspective on smile, pain and pickles!
just the three letter word is in my mind and i dont think it is just enough......but still nothing else to describe my feeling but just that three letter word...its WOW....!!!!
wow..cool poem yaar..ultimate modern poem
The smiles market has hit an all time new low around here. I try to be friendly with everyone, but get a lot of glares from older folks. I told Mrs. Phos if I ever become one of those people that goes around with a permanent frown to smother me with a pillow while I am sleeping.
While everyone said its a lovely one but for me it was a total OHT (Overhead Transmission)*looks around sheepishly*
wow! talk about imagery... very original and thought-provoking...read it several times enjoying it more and more...and what about those days when we don't have enough money to go shooing?:Dlove and hugs...
Hi Mithe: :-) i like it that you understand that part of my posts. Hi Mampi: he he he... nimaane jaye akhar.. :-) Hi D: Thanks. Hi dil ki pyar: I like the new nick. And Thanks a ton. Hi Varun: hmm... yes. Hi Think Tank: Modern poem jaisa kuchh socha to nahi tha.. par chalo yahi sahi :-) thanks Hi Phos: Nah.. thats not happening to u at all. Not in the foreseeable future. Hi ~nm: Tumne sach to bola! :-)Hi human being: Aaah.. now thats sth i didnt think of.. i was thinking more in terms of selling.. :-) Hi inexplicably: Thanks.
wow!!! brillaint analogy...
Excellant.So deep yet so simple.
good composition...want to see more of this kind!
Hi myspace, mayz, Balvinder, Rhett, D Writer: Thanks!!
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