Monday, May 04, 2009

मेरे युग का सच / Our Times

आओ, प्यार और सौहार्द की बात करें,
लावे में बैठ कर हम तुम
बर्फ और पहाड़ की बात करें

18 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

waah waaah.. bahut khoobsoorat..

Mayz said...

wah wah!!! mashallah!!

my space said...

bahut acchey!! laave mein baithkar pahado ki baat karey..par yahi to jeevan hain na?? main issey ashawadi kahungi...

Anonymous said...

गलते हुए शरीरों को भूल कर
आने वाले स्वर्णिम कल की बातें करें

state of mind? said...

like the juxtapositions!!

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Peenuts said...

Niceeeeee

hitchwriter said...

really nice !

The Rat... said...

कल की शुरुआत प्यारी होगी
ये सोचके उसकी तयारी की बात करें ||

Pssst: forgive if the maathra's ae wrong.. i still need to hone my written hindi

oo7 said...

kya baat hai.
u are on a roll buddy.

San said...

beautiful..

How do we know said...

Hi pink orchid: Thank you!!

Hi mayz: :-)

Hi my space: ashawadi... haan.. i agree.. thats not the way i first thought of it, but its a lovely new perspective :-)

Hi Anon: us ke liye shart hai ki aane vaala kal svarnim ho..

Hi state of mind: Thank you!

Hi peenuts and hitchwriter: Thanks!!

Hi Rat: Not only r ur matras right, its also very nice addendum to my post. Thank you!

Hi oo7: Thanks. This is what a 3 day holiday does to the mind :-)

HI San: Thanks buddy.

ThoughtSafari said...

No wonder people think of you as a 'Social Activist" :) Loved it!

Mahi said...

kya baat hai..........

PARRY said...

thode se shabdon ne bahut kuch bayan kar diya. nice.

How do we know said...

hi Thoughtsafari: Thanks!

Hi Mahi: Thanks!

Hi Parry: Bade chir baad! Gud to c u, and thanks!

Onkar said...

Beautiful. True, there is a big disconnect between the reality and the talk.

Mampi said...

beautifully put.
your poetry always manages to awe me.