You always knew, did you not
That you were dealing
Not with a woman
But with a hand grenade
When you pull out the plug,
You must also, throw it away..
You pried the plug loose,
But did not
Follow
The rule of the hand grenade
I exploded
Right there, in your hands..
And you ...too…
You always knew, did you not,
That we could both get annihilated?
27 comments:
Ooops...
I'd say he is a lucky guy to have an exploding woman in his life. THere are so few of this species that remain.
Very beautifully written.
After long time... and good one too.
ouch!! good goin gal!! :)
Good one :)
Nice to read a post from you after a long time. Thank you.
beautiful!!!perfect!!
It is very nice to meet you.
And that is one very good poem.
i dont kno whether to laugh, smile or get scared n run for cover...
this post jus held me...d cheer creativity was amazin...
wud love to read more such stuff
so blogrollin ya
i second mayz
and yep blogrolling ya..
take care
The grenade is called PMS here...
boss!!.. awesome..
infact.. 'powerful' is more like it.. way to go!
Hi Manish: :-) I could almost see you say that "Oops!"
Hi Mampi: Na, bahut hain... they just don't write abt it on their blog :-)
Hi Anonymous: You've been around long enough to know that this has come after ages, and yet u need to sign "Anonymous"?
Hi Trinaa, Manasa, Edita, Zirelda: Thank you, and Zirelda, the pleasure is mine! :-)
Hi mayz: I have liked ur blog every single time that i have been there.. so coming from you, thats some compliment.Thanks! And Thank you for the blog rolling too!
Hi V: Thanks too! And also for the blogrolling!!
Hi Phos: ROTFL! Trust you to come up with a twist like that!! Now THAT'S creativity! And true too.
Hi Bhai with chai: Thanks! :-)
I hope the metaphor used is just that - a metaphor..good stuff.
ye manzilein: Kya pata...
I came wandering around to this blog..... without your knowledge,
You never realised that there could strangers in the vicinity....
who could also be shaken up by the explosion.......
I am trying to piece myself together again.......
Really explosive........the blast is just too powerful.... Take care!!!
wow...
very strong and really explosive...
the image is so impressive, the reader is convinced with no arguement... just holding his/her breath with eyes wide open...
loved it a lot... it's so true...
should read it to my husband
;)
i am speechless.....
Hi j p joshi: ?? Ur blogs give no indication of an explosion...perhaps it was too private a thing? Take care! These times can really be difficult..
Hi human being: Husband? There must really be a lot of love between you for u to show him this.. :-) m happy to hear this.
Hi soulbrush: :-)
I guess our emotions cannot get any more expressive than such explosions...!!! Amazingly written... Lady... am glad to the depths & intensities... :)
Keep writing..
Hey Yam: Will u believe if i tell u that u were on my mind when i wrote this? :-)
Throwing away the grenade after pulling the plug is not the correct solution, i suppose. The blast will be much much severe. If you have pulled the plug which may be by mistake most of the times, just walk, rather run away.
But then come back after some time and peep from a distance before coming near again like a child looks from a distance at the unexploded cracker.
HI Balvinder: For some reason, i think that this comment understands my post the best.
Mainey likhaa hai na ki
"Roz miltey hain log....
Kuchh samjhtey bhee hain"
Hi Balvinder: :-) yahi ganimat hai ki kuchh to samajhte hain..
Arey wah!! yeh toh ek nayee kavitaa ban rahee hai.
Hi Balvinder: :-)
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