Saturday, October 06, 2007

You, the explorer
On the other side
of the magical river
Already across, and traveling away
Faster every minute.

Me, the vagabond
seeking love
in small change
and you
in full measure.

18 comments:

Giri said...

Me, the confused
seeking explanation
in a comment
from you
in good measure :)

MM said...

Lines of wanting and desire..
Almost Surreal..
:)

Raza Rumi said...

What a pleasure to have found this blog-
loved these lines :)

dharmabum said...

there is no you and me, only one - us. :)

How do we know said...

Hi Giri: :-) Gud to c u here. Am currently reading Siddhartha by Herman Hesse and this poem came automatically when i was reading the love story of Siddhartha and Kamala.

Hi mm: Thanks. Wanting and desire...those universal afflictors of pain :-)

Hi Raza: Thanks :-)

Hi Dharma: When you have 2 people fused as one in love, you usually have 2 half people. No wait, i am just being verbose for nothing... sure, if you believe in the we, We it is :-)

The Phosgene Kid said...

Well worth the wait. Excellent!!

adi said...

the explorer is time and me being life...
how r u both, howdy n junior howdy :)

Wriju said...

What a beautiful poem :)

Keshi said...

loved Giri's comment :)

Keshi.

Itchingtowrite said...

hows the new baby doing??
Have Fun!!

EXSENO said...

Did you write this lovely poetry. Very nice.

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

oh these are beautiful words.
Awesome!

Madhuri Shinde said...

Seeking love in small change...hmm...something to think about:)

How do we know said...

Hi Phos: Thanks!

Hi Adi: Life following Time? I dont think so..or even time following Life? Nah.. they are the eternal playmates, them.
Junior Howdy is in his colic days and howdy is totally grateful for parents in life!

Hi Wriju: Thanks.

Hi Keshi: Giri will be happy to hear that. He always was blessed with great wit!

Hi ITW: He's fine.. very colicky, but thankfully i m not alone in this, the Other's parents help a lot. In fact, i m soo vela these days.

Hi exseno: Thanks!

Hi Raaji: Thank you.

Hi Madhuri: Yep.

Sahil said...

wow...amazing...

adi said...

and i come and read this once again...
:)

How do we know said...

Hi Sahil and Adi: Thank you ppl :-)

Mampi said...

beautiful...
i say this for all your short poems i m discovering tonite.