Monday, October 31, 2011

Your silence
like the dense fog
covers
all the seeds
i plant
in the soil of love

They die
in the cold.

6 comments:

A said...

I love the depth and intensity you put into your writing. You are one of them rare people who really know how to convey such a deep meaning in so few a words. Beautiful.
Best,
A

Adee said...

someday the silence will lift
its veil of frost
carried on the rays of your smile
love will arrive
sprouting from the soil
a reward of our toil

Adee said...

what u wrote was so beautiful. couldn't resist typing in those meaningless lines :)

How do we know said...

Hi A: You sound vaguely familiar. Do we also know each other in the physical world?

Hi Adee: he he...

A said...

Hi HDWK,

Unfortunately, I think I have known you only through your blog. But since then I have frequently read your older posts and have been sort of a silent admirer of your writing. I am also from punjab but don't know if we have ever crossed paths. Is there a way we can confirm that? We can share email id with each other, if you think suitable.

Best,
A

How do we know said...

Hi A: Blog friends are the best kind of friends :-)