how do you tell the world
that you sold it
for a glance?
How do u tell a glance
that it couldn't care less
and you couldn't care more...
How do you tell care
that it is at the wrong doorstep?
This house belongs to heartache.
How do you tell heartache
that it is a misnomer?
It hurts everywhere.
22 comments:
this is smthn i was waitin to read for a long time...i shud thank you for this post
by God,
You have magic with these little weavings we call poems.
what a beautiful expression. Jaan ee kadh layee oou...
and I forgot to add that these are more like
your hand produces what I need to write. I do not have the magic though.
*claps*
as usual interesting and intellectual type post it is :)
Very interesting post
Oh my dear, you are right. So it does. But not forever, although it may remain in a little place, which is in your heart, to give an occasional reminder.
as usual...amazing....
Beautiful lines.
Hi Mayz: :-)
Hi Mampi: humein milna hi tha hum dum...
Hi Deepak: Ty!!
Chowla Sir: Thank you.
Hi Z: Yes.. thats whats left of heartaches after a while.. a few marks of bruises. .then they too fade away.. :-)
Hi Cynosure and Onkar sir: Thank you!
Beautiful! Could read it many times over.
yep, not all scars are on the outside.
kehte hain jise dard-e-dil
sirf dil mein nahi rehta kambakht
nason mein phail jata hai
zehar ban kar
...
Before we started making the heart the centre of all our heart-aches and feelings, it used to be Liver and in Urdu/Hindi - Jigar :)
A misnomer called heartache...beautiful.
Hi D: Really? Thanks so much!
Hi Phos: Yep!! :-)
Hi Adee: :-) Khamoshi ka haasil bhi, ek lambi si khamoshi hai..
Hi IHM: So true! where did the heart come from?
Hi Himanshu: Thanks!
ah it really does!
what an ending!
and everywhere
is the whole world... no?
love to you
baap re baap...
this gem could have come only from love...
@ hb: Thank you. i love ur new series too..
Hi Oreen: :-) u'll neva guess..
OH! beauty and brevity! this is something!
Think it hurts everywhere now , wait till you get to be my age!
@ San: Thanks!
Hi Phos: :-) Trust u to say that! Did i tell u yet, that one loves ur funny spin on things? really do.
beautifully written dear..great stuff!
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