Monday, October 31, 2011

Your silence
like the dense fog
covers
all the seeds
i plant
in the soil of love

They die
in the cold.

6 comments:

  1. I love the depth and intensity you put into your writing. You are one of them rare people who really know how to convey such a deep meaning in so few a words. Beautiful.
    Best,
    A

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  2. someday the silence will lift
    its veil of frost
    carried on the rays of your smile
    love will arrive
    sprouting from the soil
    a reward of our toil

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  3. what u wrote was so beautiful. couldn't resist typing in those meaningless lines :)

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  4. Hi A: You sound vaguely familiar. Do we also know each other in the physical world?

    Hi Adee: he he...

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  5. Hi HDWK,

    Unfortunately, I think I have known you only through your blog. But since then I have frequently read your older posts and have been sort of a silent admirer of your writing. I am also from punjab but don't know if we have ever crossed paths. Is there a way we can confirm that? We can share email id with each other, if you think suitable.

    Best,
    A

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  6. Hi A: Blog friends are the best kind of friends :-)

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