Monday, May 04, 2009

मेरे युग का सच / Our Times

आओ, प्यार और सौहार्द की बात करें,
लावे में बैठ कर हम तुम
बर्फ और पहाड़ की बात करें
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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousMon May 04, 06:30:00 pm GMT+5:30

    waah waaah.. bahut khoobsoorat..

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  2. LuciferMon May 04, 07:36:00 pm GMT+5:30

    wah wah!!! mashallah!!

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  3. my spaceMon May 04, 07:47:00 pm GMT+5:30

    bahut acchey!! laave mein baithkar pahado ki baat karey..par yahi to jeevan hain na?? main issey ashawadi kahungi...

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  4. AnonymousTue May 05, 04:06:00 pm GMT+5:30

    गलते हुए शरीरों को भूल कर
    आने वाले स्वर्णिम कल की बातें करें

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  5. state of mind?Tue May 05, 09:50:00 pm GMT+5:30

    like the juxtapositions!!

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  6. state of mind?Tue May 05, 09:50:00 pm GMT+5:30

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  7. PeenutsWed May 06, 10:05:00 am GMT+5:30

    Niceeeeee

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  8. AnonymousWed May 06, 06:25:00 pm GMT+5:30

    really nice !

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  9. RatzzzWed May 06, 10:45:00 pm GMT+5:30

    कल की शुरुआत प्यारी होगी
    ये सोचके उसकी तयारी की बात करें ||

    Pssst: forgive if the maathra's ae wrong.. i still need to hone my written hindi

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  10. rainboyThu May 07, 01:31:00 pm GMT+5:30

    kya baat hai.
    u are on a roll buddy.

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  11. SanThu May 07, 03:14:00 pm GMT+5:30

    beautiful..

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  12. How do we knowFri May 08, 01:01:00 am GMT+5:30

    Hi pink orchid: Thank you!!

    Hi mayz: :-)

    Hi my space: ashawadi... haan.. i agree.. thats not the way i first thought of it, but its a lovely new perspective :-)

    Hi Anon: us ke liye shart hai ki aane vaala kal svarnim ho..

    Hi state of mind: Thank you!

    Hi peenuts and hitchwriter: Thanks!!

    Hi Rat: Not only r ur matras right, its also very nice addendum to my post. Thank you!

    Hi oo7: Thanks. This is what a 3 day holiday does to the mind :-)

    HI San: Thanks buddy.

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  13. ThoughtSafariFri May 08, 01:19:00 pm GMT+5:30

    No wonder people think of you as a 'Social Activist" :) Loved it!

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  14. MahiSat May 09, 07:25:00 pm GMT+5:30

    kya baat hai..........

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  15. PARRYWed May 20, 09:53:00 pm GMT+5:30

    thode se shabdon ne bahut kuch bayan kar diya. nice.

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  16. How do we knowWed May 20, 11:38:00 pm GMT+5:30

    hi Thoughtsafari: Thanks!

    Hi Mahi: Thanks!

    Hi Parry: Bade chir baad! Gud to c u, and thanks!

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  17. OnkarFri May 22, 11:33:00 am GMT+5:30

    Beautiful. True, there is a big disconnect between the reality and the talk.

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  18. MampiThu May 28, 09:10:00 pm GMT+5:30

    beautifully put.
    your poetry always manages to awe me.

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