Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Some days
are days
of easy bargains
when smiles
go cheap
just because
they are over-supplied

And some days
are days of auction
when
the mundane pains
bring a fortune
just because
people like
a little pickle
with their food.
at

17 comments:

  1. AnonymousWed Nov 26, 03:47:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Wow! what thinking!! I think this one is your best out of all the compositions I have read on your blog. What I like about your creations is their starkness-a kind of furious power that emanates from them. A few words but tark reality!! I hope you continue to write forever and always...

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  2. MampiWed Nov 26, 04:08:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Yes, so right.
    Your compositions always leave me with a big gaping 'wow'

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  3. DWed Nov 26, 04:58:00 pm GMT+5:30

    What a fresh perspective on smile, pain and pickles!

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  4. Yamini MeduriWed Nov 26, 05:33:00 pm GMT+5:30

    just the three letter word is in my mind and i dont think it is just enough......but still nothing else to describe my feeling but just that three letter word...its WOW....!!!!

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  5. VarunWed Nov 26, 06:17:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Economics? :)

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  6. Think TankWed Nov 26, 07:24:00 pm GMT+5:30

    wow..cool poem yaar..ultimate modern poem

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  7. The Phosgene KidWed Nov 26, 08:54:00 pm GMT+5:30

    The smiles market has hit an all time new low around here. I try to be friendly with everyone, but get a lot of glares from older folks. I told Mrs. Phos if I ever become one of those people that goes around with a permanent frown to smother me with a pillow while I am sleeping.

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  8. ~nmWed Nov 26, 11:45:00 pm GMT+5:30

    While everyone said its a lovely one but for me it was a total OHT (Overhead Transmission)

    *looks around sheepishly*

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  9. human beingThu Nov 27, 01:21:00 am GMT+5:30

    wow! talk about imagery... very original and thought-provoking...

    read it several times enjoying it more and more...

    and what about those days when we don't have enough money to go shooing?
    :D

    love and hugs...

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  10. InexplicablyThu Nov 27, 05:40:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Nice

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  11. How do we knowThu Nov 27, 06:09:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Hi Mithe: :-) i like it that you understand that part of my posts.

    Hi Mampi: he he he... nimaane jaye akhar.. :-)

    Hi D: Thanks.

    Hi dil ki pyar: I like the new nick. And Thanks a ton.

    Hi Varun: hmm... yes.

    Hi Think Tank: Modern poem jaisa kuchh socha to nahi tha.. par chalo yahi sahi :-) thanks

    Hi Phos: Nah.. thats not happening to u at all. Not in the foreseeable future.

    Hi ~nm: Tumne sach to bola! :-)

    Hi human being: Aaah.. now thats sth i didnt think of.. i was thinking more in terms of selling.. :-)

    Hi inexplicably: Thanks.

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  12. my spaceThu Nov 27, 10:11:00 pm GMT+5:30

    :-)..m speechless!

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  13. LuciferFri Nov 28, 12:32:00 pm GMT+5:30

    wow!!! brillaint analogy...

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  14. Balvinder BalliFri Nov 28, 04:19:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Excellant.
    So deep yet so simple.

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  15. KushMon Dec 01, 01:08:00 am GMT+5:30

    Well said!

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  16. D WriterWed Dec 03, 11:42:00 am GMT+5:30

    good composition...want to see more of this kind!

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  17. How do we knowMon Dec 15, 03:30:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Hi myspace, mayz, Balvinder, Rhett, D Writer: Thanks!!

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