Tuesday, May 13, 2008

Kitty Party

We take that loneliness
From the yoke on our napes
And dilute it
With laughter
Tinged with
A slow poison

We giggle
While downing
The heady cocktail.
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5 comments:

  1. SwatiTue May 13, 02:14:00 pm GMT+5:30

    :-)

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  2. human beingTue May 13, 04:44:00 pm GMT+5:30

    a very original image
    soooo impressive
    and thought-provoking

    and truthfully and sweetly bitter...

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  3. Id it isWed May 14, 02:42:00 am GMT+5:30

    A heady cocktail no doubt as it loosens our sensibilities and fades out obvious differences; even those between good and bad, hehe

    Beautifully coined.

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  4. The Phosgene KidWed May 14, 08:46:00 am GMT+5:30

    Interesting poem. Loneliness is a slow poison...

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  5. How do we knowWed May 14, 10:47:00 am GMT+5:30

    Hi Swati: :-)

    Hi Human Being, id it is: Thank you!

    Hi Phos: Thank you!

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