Saturday, October 06, 2007

You, the explorer
On the other side
of the magical river
Already across, and traveling away
Faster every minute.

Me, the vagabond
seeking love
in small change
and you
in full measure.
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18 comments:

  1. గిరి GiriSun Oct 07, 03:49:00 am GMT+5:30

    Me, the confused
    seeking explanation
    in a comment
    from you
    in good measure :)

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  2. Movie MazaaSun Oct 07, 10:19:00 am GMT+5:30

    Lines of wanting and desire..
    Almost Surreal..
    :)

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  3. Raza RumiMon Oct 08, 12:01:00 am GMT+5:30

    What a pleasure to have found this blog-
    loved these lines :)

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  4. dharmabumMon Oct 08, 06:18:00 pm GMT+5:30

    there is no you and me, only one - us. :)

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  5. How do we knowTue Oct 09, 11:17:00 am GMT+5:30

    Hi Giri: :-) Gud to c u here. Am currently reading Siddhartha by Herman Hesse and this poem came automatically when i was reading the love story of Siddhartha and Kamala.

    Hi mm: Thanks. Wanting and desire...those universal afflictors of pain :-)

    Hi Raza: Thanks :-)

    Hi Dharma: When you have 2 people fused as one in love, you usually have 2 half people. No wait, i am just being verbose for nothing... sure, if you believe in the we, We it is :-)

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  6. The Phosgene KidTue Oct 09, 11:05:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Well worth the wait. Excellent!!

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  7. delhidreamsWed Oct 10, 06:01:00 pm GMT+5:30

    the explorer is time and me being life...
    how r u both, howdy n junior howdy :)

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  8. WrijuWed Oct 10, 11:27:00 pm GMT+5:30

    What a beautiful poem :)

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  9. KeshiThu Oct 11, 08:34:00 am GMT+5:30

    loved Giri's comment :)

    Keshi.

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  10. ItchingtowriteThu Oct 11, 11:15:00 am GMT+5:30

    hows the new baby doing??
    Have Fun!!

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  11. EXSENOThu Oct 11, 10:21:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Did you write this lovely poetry. Very nice.

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  12. WritingsForLifeThu Oct 11, 11:18:00 pm GMT+5:30

    oh these are beautiful words.
    Awesome!

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  13. Madhuri ShindeFri Oct 12, 12:13:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Seeking love in small change...hmm...something to think about:)

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  14. How do we knowSun Oct 14, 10:58:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Hi Phos: Thanks!

    Hi Adi: Life following Time? I dont think so..or even time following Life? Nah.. they are the eternal playmates, them.
    Junior Howdy is in his colic days and howdy is totally grateful for parents in life!

    Hi Wriju: Thanks.

    Hi Keshi: Giri will be happy to hear that. He always was blessed with great wit!

    Hi ITW: He's fine.. very colicky, but thankfully i m not alone in this, the Other's parents help a lot. In fact, i m soo vela these days.

    Hi exseno: Thanks!

    Hi Raaji: Thank you.

    Hi Madhuri: Yep.

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  15. Sahil BangaMon Dec 03, 05:13:00 pm GMT+5:30

    wow...amazing...

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  16. delhidreamsThu Dec 06, 06:38:00 pm GMT+5:30

    and i come and read this once again...
    :)

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  17. How do we knowThu Dec 06, 07:34:00 pm GMT+5:30

    Hi Sahil and Adi: Thank you ppl :-)

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  18. MampiSun Sept 14, 09:50:00 pm GMT+5:30

    beautiful...
    i say this for all your short poems i m discovering tonite.

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